I wrote song

[SilentVoice]

So... I wrote a song
As im not to confident about its quality ill let u guys give me ur opinions




No one's but ur own

Do not try chain that which cant be held,
Do not try to smother the beast u always felt,
Do not try cheat urself , play the cards life has dealt,
Do not try to kill the honor , ur pride can only melt.
Just...let... GO !

Take the pain , stand and fight,
Grow a spine , walk the blight,
Take a breath , reload ur mind,
There is something out there..
...u need to FIND !

Dont try to take what was never yours,
Dont try to ignore ur inner wealth ignore the whores,
Dont try to avoid the action , use ur turn,
Dont try to set them str8 , take ur hold
...make them BURN !

Take the pain , hold the fire,
Grow a spine , rise up higher,
Take a breath , release ur hate ,
There is something out there
...that wont have wait

Alone , but bold ,
Nothing can make u fold,
With scar u'll be the one to die,
The scars that brought u wings to fly,
U are what u made of stone ,
U are eternal...
U are no one's but ur own !

Take the pain , stand and fight,
Grow a spine , walk the blight,
Take a breath , reload ur mind,
There is something out there..
...u need to FIND !

...start today , all I have in u is faith...

[newman]

silentvoice said:

There is something out there
...that wont have wait

?? is this the original or it was just a write mistake?

I think its more a poem than a song becouse every word rymes on eachother.. butt its a clear lyric, you know where you are singing about keep on going and try to work it out more and more and maybe you will start a band and be famous
Gratz with your (first) song
newman